She who can't cut off , He who cant leave

"2:33 p.m" This is what his watch read when he glanced towards. He strolled  , Gazed at  his surroundings. From  stray cats t...

"2:33 p.m"
This is what his watch read when he glanced towards.
He strolled  ,
Gazed at  his surroundings.
From  stray cats to the vendors , he  assessed them   all.
And placing himself by a  stairs of some deserted temple , indulged himself in  analysis .splurged . Some serious  thinking.

He had walked out that very morning after the differences with her broadened , clouds of dissatisfaction widened. And for his dismay, growing daunting tensions .Scenarios developed in a way making him  harder to adjust.As if love once that bloomed was desperate in search of ways to sneak out , conspiracy was declared on to break them off.


At times , he wanted to cut it off.To separate their ways. His and hers, for better or for worse.But every time such thoughts lured him , her image would pay him  a visit .Her face appeared out of the blue .And It was times as  those that made him realize  his heart would  go icy without her , beats were out of proportion .He promised himself  he would never draw out , no matter what . Abandoning her and escaping from this tangle was in denial .For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love.

He got on his feet  just to pace towards home, where she would be . And she was there  sitting  by the window . Pale and Blue. As he pushed the door , the cracking sound broke the silence.Her eyes glanced at him. Her dark brown eyes almost frozen in fear of being abandoned.Those rich black hair snaked to her shoulder and those lips looked as if it was just getting ready to plead.
  "In case , are you  having thoughts of------------- " just as those lips uttered stuttering  , he leaped towards her, wrapped  her around in his arms  . He approached slightly pressing his lips against hers. Words couldn't make their way out , but they made up.He knew she was the one for him .For her , he had always been.And as they embraced each other  as the night was embracing the planet , each vowed silently .The vows , of eternity .



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47 comments

  1. I'm loving this post Goku :')
    The vows , of eternity !!

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    1. Thanks happygirl
      i just wanted to show someone who loves for real doesnt back off no matter how big the hurdle is , and there are no excuses :)

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  2. Wow!! Amazing romance !!
    Is this u r story man?
    Really nice :)

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    1. haha no , its just imagination
      but i would love to have some never ending story :_

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  3. This is very intriguing. Great job! Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and for your comment. It was very much appreciated.

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  4. It beautifully conveyed the contrasting feeling we often have. Well done.
    Thanks for visiting. :)

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  5. Powerful images. Well done.

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  6. I loved it! Made me feel so much 'love'! Powerful one! :-)

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    1. thanks for the love :D
      Love sure does make everything powerful :P

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  7. Beautifully written with a spiritual ending. Julie

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    1. Thanks for visiting empty insider :) i will strive to write better posts . so please look forward to it .

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  8. well written
    glad to meet you
    thank you for stopping by belgium and commenting, it is much appreciated !
    anni

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  9. I could feel the emotion in this piece. Nicely done :)

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  10. Love that! You are such a good writer - - can FEEL it !!

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    1. thank you for the response
      much appreciated Juliette :)

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  12. You're wise beyond your years. Nice writing. Thank you so much for visiting my blog and for your kind comment. I am so sorry about your grandfather.

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  13. Very sweet - lovely and thoughtful and very very romantic! Thank you for sharing your beautiful story here! Take care
    x

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    1. :)
      stay tuned for more stories Old kitty .

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  14. You had me at-For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love.
    This is a lovely read.

    Not Just My Allegories

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  15. Whew! You had me. I was sure he was leaving. I like these kind of endings so much better between lovers.

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  16. "For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love"
    "He approached slightly pressing his lips against hers. Words couldn't make their way out , but they made up"
    "they embraced each other as the night was embracing the planet , each vowed silently .The vows , of eternity"

    Just wanted to say, I loved reading this short story, love is beautiful and you portrayed it so well, you are a talented writer :)
    and yeah, thanks for stopping by my Blog, hope you will visit again :)

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    1. Thank you for all the sweet stuffs Dark Angel :)
      and i will make sure i do again .

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  17. Hey, you write a GOOD story.
    One which could well be true.
    (sigh!)
    Thank you!
    I'll be Bach...
    PEACE

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  18. that was very lovely and romantic. you do have a way with words. thank you for visiting my blog. i think i'm getting a crush. xx

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