differences
eternity
Feelings
She who can't cut off , He who cant leave
8:26 AM
"2:33 p.m"
This is what his watch read when he glanced towards.
He strolled ,
Gazed at his surroundings.
From stray cats to the vendors , he assessed them all.
And placing himself by a stairs of some deserted temple , indulged himself in analysis .splurged . Some serious thinking.
He had walked out that very morning after the differences with her broadened , clouds of dissatisfaction widened. And for his dismay, growing daunting tensions .Scenarios developed in a way making him harder to adjust.As if love once that bloomed was desperate in search of ways to sneak out , conspiracy was declared on to break them off.
At times , he wanted to cut it off.To separate their ways. His and hers, for better or for worse.But every time such thoughts lured him , her image would pay him a visit .Her face appeared out of the blue .And It was times as those that made him realize his heart would go icy without her , beats were out of proportion .He promised himself he would never draw out , no matter what . Abandoning her and escaping from this tangle was in denial .For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love.
He got on his feet just to pace towards home, where she would be . And she was there sitting by the window . Pale and Blue. As he pushed the door , the cracking sound broke the silence.Her eyes glanced at him. Her dark brown eyes almost frozen in fear of being abandoned.Those rich black hair snaked to her shoulder and those lips looked as if it was just getting ready to plead.
"In case , are you having thoughts of------------- " just as those lips uttered stuttering , he leaped towards her, wrapped her around in his arms . He approached slightly pressing his lips against hers. Words couldn't make their way out , but they made up.He knew she was the one for him .For her , he had always been.And as they embraced each other as the night was embracing the planet , each vowed silently .The vows , of eternity .
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This is what his watch read when he glanced towards.
He strolled ,
Gazed at his surroundings.
From stray cats to the vendors , he assessed them all.
And placing himself by a stairs of some deserted temple , indulged himself in analysis .splurged . Some serious thinking.
He had walked out that very morning after the differences with her broadened , clouds of dissatisfaction widened. And for his dismay, growing daunting tensions .Scenarios developed in a way making him harder to adjust.As if love once that bloomed was desperate in search of ways to sneak out , conspiracy was declared on to break them off.
At times , he wanted to cut it off.To separate their ways. His and hers, for better or for worse.But every time such thoughts lured him , her image would pay him a visit .Her face appeared out of the blue .And It was times as those that made him realize his heart would go icy without her , beats were out of proportion .He promised himself he would never draw out , no matter what . Abandoning her and escaping from this tangle was in denial .For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love.
He got on his feet just to pace towards home, where she would be . And she was there sitting by the window . Pale and Blue. As he pushed the door , the cracking sound broke the silence.Her eyes glanced at him. Her dark brown eyes almost frozen in fear of being abandoned.Those rich black hair snaked to her shoulder and those lips looked as if it was just getting ready to plead.
"In case , are you having thoughts of------------- " just as those lips uttered stuttering , he leaped towards her, wrapped her around in his arms . He approached slightly pressing his lips against hers. Words couldn't make their way out , but they made up.He knew she was the one for him .For her , he had always been.And as they embraced each other as the night was embracing the planet , each vowed silently .The vows , of eternity .
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I'm loving this post Goku :')
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Thanks happygirl
Deletei just wanted to show someone who loves for real doesnt back off no matter how big the hurdle is , and there are no excuses :)
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Delete"For he believed , love had no excuses and where it did , it was no love"
ReplyDelete"He approached slightly pressing his lips against hers. Words couldn't make their way out , but they made up"
"they embraced each other as the night was embracing the planet , each vowed silently .The vows , of eternity"
Just wanted to say, I loved reading this short story, love is beautiful and you portrayed it so well, you are a talented writer :)
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I'll be Bach...
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